[Helpers] 1-12 lesson files: cleaned up version -> Lesson 1

Sandra Davis sandradavis7 at yahoo.com
Fri May 6 11:56:01 PDT 2005


http://www.fire-serpent.org/fscnew/tantra/25introk.html
http://www.fire-serpent.org/fscnew/tantra/25introk_18-12-03.html

#2. Introduction to Kundalini
Both lesson links seem to point to the same 'new' format - the
following is the review of 25introk_18-12-03.html.

25introk_18-12-03.html is the latest version with the updated essay.

I need to scroll? Horizontal scrolling is uncommon and cumbersome to
me.

The .RAM graphic near the top of the page does not load, and when
clicked, gives a 404 error.

The two text "Realmedia Video" and "Audio Only" graphics at the top of
the page are completely illegible on my monitor screen, and both when
clicked give a 404 error.

I _do not_ like the shape of the header graphic, with the step-down
text. I also, without having spent time on it, don't have a
constructive suggestion. It just grates on me as a bunch of separate
graphical pieces, rather than a congruent whole.

The right-most top graphic of Mystress link gives a 404 error.

The left-most top graphic of the FST triangle points to the
25introk.ram link, and this gives a 404 error.

"Experiences" graphic does not load (and there is no link to click,
should there be?).

There is no homework contents given.

The sentence at the bottom of the page: "This page is located at..."
lists both old & new address.

Mystweb link gives a 404 error.

"This page was lovingly created by... " link gives a 404 error.

Home link (in two locations, menu column and at bottom of page) gives a
404 error.

The following menu column links give a 404 error: Home, Video, Audio,
Renewing, F.A.Q., Sessions, and Shaktipat.

The menu column calls for "Other Links" and then pages to "Lesson
Links" - is there a reason for going with 2 names for this aspect?

The menu column calls for "Experience Links" and I see it pages to an
'experiences' section of the essay, plus a right-tab area for links -
this is confusing. Am I going to see links? Am I continuing the lesson?

I had trouble knowing which page I was on as I followed the links -
could we consider a coloring convention at some point? I.e. one idea
would be to make lesson pages this darker version as seen, all other
pages are slightly lighter? Are the .CSS sheets set-up for this kind of
experimentation?

In the essay area, I see no reason for the small dark-blue text that
says "Introduction to Kundalini" - it's given just above, and it's not
a duplicated stylization in any other 'tabbed' contents area.

There are no experiences content given in the "Experiences Link"
right-column area.

There are no links given in the "Lessons Link" right-column area.



		
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