[Helpers] 1-12 lesson files: cleaned up version -> Lesson 1
Sandra Davis
sandradavis7 at yahoo.com
Fri May 6 13:02:38 PDT 2005
A few more missed the 1st round:
There is no mouse-over tag for the right-most top graphic for Mystress.
The "Introduction to Kundalini" header dark-blue text at the top of the
essay tab needs to look like the header text on the following lesson
14matgod.
The "Introduction to Kundalini" blue-green text above the essay tab is
scripted as link to Video in the 14matgod lesson - should it be a
linked text here?
All throughout the page, the mouse-over tags sometimes have periods,
sometimes not - is consistency in look important?
The mouse-over tag for the Video link in the left menu column is the
only abbreviated one - it's Vid.
The bottom text graphic link "Previous" gives a 404 error, and is
missing a mouse-over tag.
The bottom right graphic of the Earth gives a 404 error.
--- Sandra Davis <sandradavis7 at yahoo.com> wrote:
> http://www.fire-serpent.org/fscnew/tantra/25introk.html
> http://www.fire-serpent.org/fscnew/tantra/25introk_18-12-03.html
> Video: 25introk.ram
>
> #2. Introduction to Kundalini
> Both lesson links seem to point to the same 'new' format - the
> following is the review of 25introk_18-12-03.html.
>
> 25introk_18-12-03.html is the latest version with the updated essay.
>
> I need to scroll? Horizontal scrolling is uncommon and cumbersome to
> me.
>
> The .RAM graphic near the top of the page does not load, and when
> clicked, gives a 404 error.
>
> The two text "Realmedia Video" and "Audio Only" graphics at the top
> of the page are completely illegible on my monitor screen, and both
> when clicked give a 404 error.
>
> I _do not_ like the shape of the header graphic, with the step-down
> text. I also, without having spent time on it, don't have a
> constructive suggestion. It just grates on me as a bunch of separate
> graphical pieces, rather than a congruent whole.
>
> The right-most top graphic of Mystress link gives a 404 error.
>
> The left-most top graphic of the FST triangle points to the
> 25introk.ram link, and this gives a 404 error.
>
> "Experiences" graphic does not load (and there is no link to click,
> should there be?).
>
> There is no homework contents given.
>
> The sentence at the bottom of the page: "This page is located at..."
> lists both old & new address.
>
> Mystweb link gives a 404 error.
>
> "This page was lovingly created by... " link gives a 404 error.
>
> Home link (in two locations, menu column and at bottom of page) gives
> a 404 error.
>
> The following menu column links give a 404 error: Home, Video, Audio,
> Renewing, F.A.Q., Sessions, and Shaktipat.
>
> The menu column calls for "Other Links" and then pages to "Lesson
> Links" - is there a reason for going with 2 names for this aspect?
>
> The menu column calls for "Experience Links" and I see it pages to an
> 'experiences' section of the essay, plus a right-tab area for links -
> this is confusing. Am I going to see links? Am I continuing the
> lesson?
>
> I had trouble knowing which page I was on as I followed the links -
> could we consider a coloring convention at some point? I.e. one idea
> would be to make lesson pages this darker version as seen, all other
> pages are slightly lighter? Are the .CSS sheets set-up for this kind
> of experimentation?
>
> In the essay area, I see no reason for the small dark-blue text that
> says "Introduction to Kundalini" - it's given just above, and it's
> not a duplicated stylization in any other 'tabbed' contents area.
>
> There are no experiences content given in the "Experiences Link"
> right-column area.
>
> There are no links given in the "Lessons Link" right-column area.
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