[Helpers] 1-12 lesson files: cleaned up version -> Lesson 2
Sandra Davis
sandradavis7 at yahoo.com
Fri May 6 13:28:41 PDT 2005
*sigh* Here's a few more I missed on this Lesson 2 (I'll double-check
before I send the next few).
CORRECTIONS
14matgod_18-12-03.html is the latest version with the updated essay.
There is space for .RAM graphic at the top of the page, however - it
did not load properly.
There is a "Realmedia Video" text graphic at the top, and it is
illegible like the "Audio Only".
The sentence at the bottom of the page: "This page is located at..."
lists both old and new address, and needs to list only the new.
Therefore, on 14matgod_18-12-03.html
- If not itemized in the corrections, all other comments apply.
- Horizontal scrolling needs fixed.
--- Sandra Davis <sandradavis7 at yahoo.com> wrote:
> http://www.fire-serpent.org/fscnew/tantra/14matgod.html
> http://www.fire-serpent.org/fscnew/tantra/14matgod_18-12-03.html
> Video:14matgod.ram
>
> #3. Matriarchy & Goddess
> Both lesson links seem to point to the same 'new' format - the
> following is the review of 14matgod.html.
>
> 14matgod.html is the latest version with the updated essay.
>
> There are NINE pages to vertically scroll through because of the
> length of the quotes in the right-tab. There has to be a more
> professional looking solution.
>
> The font sizes and coloring scheme in the quotes area are not
> formatted to your style (as seen in Intro to K).
>
> The .RAM graphic at the top is missing on this page.
>
> The "Realmedia Video" text graphic at the top is missing.
>
> The text "Audio Only" graphics at the top of the page is illegible
> when clicked gives a 404 error.
>
> The right-most top graphic of Mystress link gives a 404 error, and
> there is no mouse-over tag for her.
>
> The left-most top graphic of the FST triangle points to the
> 25introk.ram link, and this gives a 404 error.
>
> The Header font inside the Essay tab looks good (and
>
> Mouse-over tags in general sometimes have periods, sometimes not.
>
> The mouse-over tag for the Video link in the left menu column is the
> only abbreviated one - it's Vid.
>
> The "Matriarchy and history" graphic text link gives a 404 error. The
> 'h' in history needs to be capitalized.
>
> The link to "Deepak Chopra" in the quotes area gives to 404 error.
>
> There is no homework contents given.
>
> There is no experiences section given in the essay tab as in the
> Intro to K lesson - should there be?
>
> Mystweb link at the bottom of the page gives a 404 error.
>
> The bottom text graphic link "Previous" needs to point to the
> 25introk_18-12-03.html version. It is also missing a mouse-over tag.
>
> Home link (in two locations, menu column and at bottom of page) gives
> a 404 error.
>
> The following menu column links give a 404 error: Home, Video, Audio,
> Renewing, F.A.Q., Sessions, and Shaktipat.
>
> The menu column link FST Shop goes to an external site - typically a
> user is notified of this before clicking (it could be as simple as
> editing the mouse-over tag).
>
> There are no experiences content given in the "Experiences Link"
> right-column area.
>
> There are no links given in the "Lessons Link" right-column area.
>
> The bottom right graphic of the Earth gives a 404 error.
>
> At the bottom of the page, "This page was lovingly created by... "
> link gives a 404 error.
>
> The sentence at the bottom of the page: "This page is located at..."
> lists the address in a repeating way (...fscnew/tantra/14matgod.html
> tantra/14matgod.html).
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