[Helpers] 1-12 lesson files: cleaned up version -> Lesson 3

[Sandra Davis]

#4. The Sacredness of Sexuality.
http://www.fire-serpent.org/fscnew/tantra/sacsex.html
http://www.fire-serpent.org/fscnew/tantra/sacsex_18-12-03.html
Video: SacredSex.ram

The only difference in the lesson formats I can see is that the middle
column of tabbed content seems wider in one than the other. Is there
more to it than this? I choose the sacsex_18-12-03.html as the one
moving forward.

The following is the review of sacsex_18-12-03.html.

Both essays are word for word exact.

The essay has the following mis-spelled and/or extra words: religous
(religious), Judaeo-christian (Judeo-Christian), tabus (taboos), Ghandi
(Gandhi), detrius (detritus), healtheir (healthier), catharisis
(catharsis), being still im meditation (in), transcendant
(transcendent), When is has sacred (remove the has), interpretated (be
interpreted), seuxality (sexuality), taoism (Taoism), focussed
(focused), ROman (Roman), body maybe be the (may be).

Mystress seems to be using line spaces in the essay to indicate 'next
thought' and as such, I feel the essay would look much cleaner and read
more easily if the space indentation preceding each line was removed.
(Much like how this email is shaped.)

The graphical choice ending the essay and beginning a student
experience/essay is different here (and better looking) than the one
for Intro to K. Standardize it?


		
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