[Helpers] 1-12 lesson files: cleaned up version -> Lesson 3

Mystress Angelique Serpent Mystress at fire-serpent.com
Fri May 6 20:37:01 PDT 2005


At 02:19 PM 5/6/2005, you wrote:
>#4. The Sacredness of Sexuality.
>http://www.fire-serpent.org/fscnew/tantra/sacsex.html
>http://www.fire-serpent.org/fscnew/tantra/sacsex_18-12-03.html
>Video: SacredSex.ram
>
>The only difference in the lesson formats I can see is that the middle
>column of tabbed content seems wider in one than the other. Is there
>more to it than this? I choose the sacsex_18-12-03.html as the one
>moving forward.
>
>The following is the review of sacsex_18-12-03.html.
>
>Both essays are word for word exact.

  Excellent. I'll nename your choice and then there will be only one. That 
is exactly what we need to know. Thanks!

>The essay has the following mis-spelled and/or extra words: religous
>(religious), Judaeo-christian (Judeo-Christian), tabus (taboos), Ghandi
>(Gandhi), detrius (detritus), healtheir (healthier), catharisis
>(catharsis), being still im meditation (in), transcendant
>(transcendent), When is has sacred (remove the has), interpretated (be
>interpreted), seuxality (sexuality), taoism (Taoism), focussed
>(focused), ROman (Roman), body maybe be the (may be).

   Do you want to fix them as you find them? Got a Canadian spellchecker?

>Mystress seems to be using line spaces in the essay to indicate 'next
>thought' and as such, I feel the essay would look much cleaner and read
>more easily if the space indentation preceding each line was removed.
>(Much like how this email is shaped.)

    Yeah, no... I like my indentations. I even put them into my emails. It 
is a Canadian English thing, even our newspaper columns are indented. The 
websites and all my writing is in Canadian English, it is a subtle but 
proud expression of patriotism... Mostly I have had to retrain the US 
spellchecker to accept Canadian words because Canadian ones are hard to find.

   The only difference is I use double space between paragraphs often in 
email and web where paper is not at issue, and single space in printed text.
    There may be places where the old code hand indent of   hack was 
used to create an indent, before I figured out how to do it with a 
stylesheet... and now it is extra indented, with both... they are easy for 
me to clean up.


>The graphical choice ending the essay and beginning a student
>experience/essay is different here (and better looking) than the one
>for Intro to K. Standardize it?

   Well spotted, thanks... :)

   Hmm, nope, glad ya like it, but barzap.gif is gone from the new design. 
I agree, it does look nice on the new, darker green but it holds the text 
window open too wide. I could try to shrink it but I don't think I need it 
anywhere, now that the parts of the page are split into the file folder 
style boxes.

   It lingers here and there, to tell me where to end an essay table box 
and begin another.




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