[Helpers] Europoster

[Kimberly]

Wow, this is cool! Nice work Mystress!

I do think though, that you've put way too much stuff on it. When I read
it, it gives me the feeling like you are trying to sell some quick fix
kinda thing, rather than giving me a feeling of true spiritual teaching.
I think this is only because there is so much to read.

I would suggest narrowing it down to something along the lines of:

"Are you experiencing:

Mystical visions?
Paranormal phenomena?
Feeling the emotions of others as if they were your own?
Other types of psychic experiences?

These things may be confusing and difficult to explain, but there is no
cause for fear. These are some of the symptoms associated with the
spontaneous spiritual awakening of Kundalini! Not only can Mystress help
you awaken your kundalini but she can also smooth the path of a
sponaneous awakening so that it becomes the blissful experience it is
meant to be!"


I really don't like the line "Are you looking for a compassionate ear?"
... Gives me the feeling of a spam email when I read it! LOL Maybe
something like this would be better?



"Private consultations with Mystress are available upon request if you'd
like to talk to someone who really understands what you're going
through."


I'd also state the professional help thing more like this:

"Mystress Angelique also offers practical advice to mental health and
healing professionals on spiritual emergence and emergencies in their
clients."

This gives it a more professional sound.

The "Are you:" section reads a bit too gimicky to me too, but I do like
most of what its saying... Hmmmm... I would suggest simply taking out
these parts:

-Ready to turn your life over to a higher power - your soul
-Afraid you are going mad?

I think taking out just those two would make it sound more genuine and
less like a commercial.  


I hope this helps!

Blessings,

Kimberly

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Helpers-bounces at fire-serpent.org [mailto:Helpers-bounces at fire-
> serpent.org] On Behalf Of Mystress Angelique Serpent
> Sent: Monday, April 17, 2006 7:21 PM
> To: Helpers at fire-serpent.org
> Subject: [Helpers] Europoster
> 
>    Here is the result of my weekend's work so far: promo poster/flyer
for
> the European tour.
> 
>   I'd like some feedback... I know the poster has too many words but I
> don't know what to cut. Opinions please!
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