[Helpers] Europoster

[Mystress Angelique Serpent]

    Great suggestions, Kimberly! Exactly the kind of feedback I am needing.

   I've been working on this almost continuously for a few days so I really 
am too close to it to see it well. Needs a fresh eye!  Needs a spellcheck 
too I suspect!

   Are you photoshop-friendly?

Want to take a whack at editing the original? It will have to be edited for 
the Sweden workshops anyhow.

  The full size psd file can be found here:

  http://fire-serpent.org/loriwest/

   BTW: what do you think of the dancing snake lady?  She could be replaced 
with a tao symbol or something, but I like that she is cute, eye catching 
and playful.

At 12:11 PM 17/04/2006, you wrote:
>Wow, this is cool! Nice work Mystress!
>
>I do think though, that you've put way too much stuff on it. When I read
>it, it gives me the feeling like you are trying to sell some quick fix
>kinda thing, rather than giving me a feeling of true spiritual teaching.
>I think this is only because there is so much to read.
>
>I would suggest narrowing it down to something along the lines of:
>
>"Are you experiencing:
>
>Mystical visions?
>Paranormal phenomena?
>Feeling the emotions of others as if they were your own?
>Other types of psychic experiences?
>
>These things may be confusing and difficult to explain, but there is no
>cause for fear. These are some of the symptoms associated with the
>spontaneous spiritual awakening of Kundalini! Not only can Mystress help
>you awaken your kundalini but she can also smooth the path of a
>sponaneous awakening so that it becomes the blissful experience it is
>meant to be!"
>
>
>I really don't like the line "Are you looking for a compassionate ear?"
>... Gives me the feeling of a spam email when I read it! LOL Maybe
>something like this would be better?
>
>
>
>"Private consultations with Mystress are available upon request if you'd
>like to talk to someone who really understands what you're going
>through."
>
>
>I'd also state the professional help thing more like this:
>
>"Mystress Angelique also offers practical advice to mental health and
>healing professionals on spiritual emergence and emergencies in their
>clients."
>
>This gives it a more professional sound.
>
>The "Are you:" section reads a bit too gimicky to me too, but I do like
>most of what its saying... Hmmmm... I would suggest simply taking out
>these parts:
>
>-Ready to turn your life over to a higher power - your soul
>-Afraid you are going mad?
>
>I think taking out just those two would make it sound more genuine and
>less like a commercial.
>
>
>I hope this helps!
>
>Blessings,
>
>Kimberly
>
> > -----Original Message-----
> > From: Helpers-bounces at fire-serpent.org [mailto:Helpers-bounces at fire-
> > serpent.org] On Behalf Of Mystress Angelique Serpent
> > Sent: Monday, April 17, 2006 7:21 PM
> > To: Helpers at fire-serpent.org
> > Subject: [Helpers] Europoster
> >
> >    Here is the result of my weekend's work so far: promo poster/flyer
>for
> > the European tour.
> >
> >   I'd like some feedback... I know the poster has too many words but I
> > don't know what to cut. Opinions please!
> >
> > http://www.fire-serpent.org/fscnew/fstpostereuro1%20copy.jpg
> > http://www.fire-serpent.org/fscnew/fstpostereuro1 copy.jpg
> > large
> >
> >
> > http://www.fire-serpent.org/fscnew/fstpostereuro2copy.jpg
> > small
> >
> >
> >
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